presentation comments

Write comments for two presentations.
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Do not judge the presentation!!!!! Just be kind and frinedly.
The first one: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/e/2PACX-1vRKq3tULJgDGe0vHWR0f5rgkL59Znj2nPfy2dDpYXCGFKu6TPaQfJVkY9gj4dHb921S9rcW02NKx1Kh/pub?start=false&loop=false&delayms=6000000
The second one: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1GV447XkQmsKr_CDC02FuJL8FG2X0LbNVuq9_nIDEGYY/edit#slide=id.ga136e698ad_0_0