Writingweek6.pdf

Throughout the course, we have been examining the work of a student who is assessingLanguage. You can access it in Content under Resources to Review. It is named:

WA#4-Sample Language Multi-Source Essay Literature Review

As you read over the material, please note the improvements the student has made since the 4and 6 source essays.

Please answer the following questions:

1. In the introduction, what is the thesis statement for this paper?

2. Compare this draft to the Six-Source Essay. Choose three improvements that the studentmade in the Multi-Source Essay and list them.

3. What are some suggestions about the relationship between animal communication andhuman language?

4. What limitations can you identify in this student draft? How would you improve it?

5. As a result of having read this article, please write a few sentences about what you mighthave learned about synthesizing sources.